since im not a native english speaker, do you think it acceptable? or should i pronounce some words differently?
If you mean in the song, I think its fine.
I would agree with the previous comments and add that the piano riff level seems a little high overall, and especially crowds the guitar slightly part around 3:00. (for example) Real nice job of tucking it in behind the vocal however.
Overall a nice effort. I think the guitar could use a little ambiance tweaking, and there's a slightly rough performance section there in the later part, but very minor.
It also seems the project might be a little heavy on the compression/limiting for my tastes, but its what everyone seems to be doing.
*Side note: Hey folks, could I suggest we try to keep the songs and critiques in the "User Showcase" area? viewforum.php?f=10
It's not a big deal, but it keeps pushing discussions on technical aspects and user issues with Mixcraft down the main thread.