Halsey - Without Me Remake

[Celtic007]

Had this song stuck in my head so I did the normal thing and remade it in Mixcraft .

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bt7JFZWdrTA

What do you think?

[Mark Bliss]

This is nice! Great use of the stock instruments.
suggestions:

Timing is tight, which is good. Maybe a little too extreme and in need of a subtle hint of "humanization" but that's my taste.

I like the way you pulled back the music to highlight the piano. But this might be a little over-done. ("pulled back" a bit excessively and the piano seems a tad loud to me.)

The bass frequencies seems a little "crowded" and a touch "muddy" (A little eq work would pretty easily clean this up)

I didnt listen carefully on studio gear, but I feel there may be a bit of "phasey" stereo processing?

Overall though, promising effort. Very well done!

[Belladonna]

Very nice. I liked how you showed the DAW it was interesting.