My newest song on SoundCloud..Enjoy!

[Gedcoz]

Hello Everyone, Here's the link to my just completed song called Stupid Commercials. Everything was recorded mixed and mastered using Mixcraft 8 Pro Studio 64-bit. Please leave a comment on SoundCloud and let me know what you think of the mix and overall sound quality of the song. Thanks ahead of time for listening...Geddy
https://soundcloud.com/gedcoz/stupid-commercials-final

[kenrob2037]

I like it. But, I'd go all out with the singing. Think Weird Al Yankovic, Alice Cooper. Make it more of a musical parody and it might grab more attention. Love the ending.

[Gedcoz]

Thanks Rob, I appreciate your comment.

[comedians]

I'm with Kenrob, not enough emphasis on the vocal. For my way of thinking a parody is about the lyric which needs to be more in your face and words telling the story being easily understood.

Some good work on the music though.

[Gedcoz]

Thanks Comedian, I do see both of your points on more emphasis on the vocals. Guess I could of sang them in a more comedic way I guess you can call it. It was a fun song to record I guess it can be categorized as Comedy Rock as I like to call it.

[Ianpb]

I had a lot of trouble understanding the lyrics too, probably due to the full-on nature of the backing instrumentation. You could try reducing the backing music during the singing and allow it to quickly rise back up when there are no vocals. An exciter effect added to the vocals may help too.

[banzailoco]

This is just a beginner observation.
There at least 50 Cymbal Crash, vocal more upfront(competing with trumpet), Guitar needs more volume during solo.

Good tune.

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[Gedcoz]

Thanks for the feedback guys I appreciate it