:D:D http://www.savefile.com/files/3898391My Tune
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My Tune
Okay, no offence.. But using MixCraft to create rock/metal etc etc is just depriving the programme of good music.. Anyone who is offended by Eminem, Dr. Dre OR Snoop Dogg OR smoking marijuana, do NOT click this link :D:D http://www.savefile.com/files/3898391
:D:D http://www.savefile.com/files/3898391DJ Dogga
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R0ckerb0y
No offense? You can't preface a slam on an entire genre with that phrase I'm afraid. 
I downloaded your tune and gave it a listen regardless and my impression is this:
The piano piece is really nice, and makes for a good underlying tone to back up the vocal piece rather than have to compete with it.
Having a tonal musical instrument in that song puts it a step above rap songs that use only drums/vocals alone.
Overall I found it a bit repetitive and had to force myself to listen and not allow my mind to drift towards writing a mental grocery list for dinner. (Carl's Junior, Bacon Guacamole $6.00 burger btw, simplified it a lot.)
Rap/R&B/Hip Hop is not my style, but I can appreciate anything that's done with skill. I can respect the tones and sound quality in that mix, I would just change it up a little bit to keep people from getting complacent.
Just my $0.02
Nice work overall.
Jack
I downloaded your tune and gave it a listen regardless and my impression is this:
The piano piece is really nice, and makes for a good underlying tone to back up the vocal piece rather than have to compete with it.
Having a tonal musical instrument in that song puts it a step above rap songs that use only drums/vocals alone.
Overall I found it a bit repetitive and had to force myself to listen and not allow my mind to drift towards writing a mental grocery list for dinner. (Carl's Junior, Bacon Guacamole $6.00 burger btw, simplified it a lot.)
Rap/R&B/Hip Hop is not my style, but I can appreciate anything that's done with skill. I can respect the tones and sound quality in that mix, I would just change it up a little bit to keep people from getting complacent.
Just my $0.02
Nice work overall.
Jack